- Vgs - Studiespesialisering Vg1
- Engelsk fellesfag
Speech: The Great Barrier Reef
En tale om The Great Barrier Reef, med både innledning, emner og konklusjon.
You have written a very well structured speech, Gaute, where you use both facts and your own reflections to underline your message. Your style of writing fits very well with the genre as you challenge your audience through the message of your speech. There are few mistakes that hinder communication. I am very happy with your work!
Elevens forslag til forbedringer:
- Watch out for prepositions
- Did you know all this or did you use any sources?
- On the one hand there are not many mistakes to be found – this is excellent. On the other hand, however, your language is fairly “easy”, if you understand what I mean. I would challenge you to spice up your written English through the use of adjectives and through linking your sentences together to create flow and emphasis.
- I would also have loved further reflections of the same quality in order for this to be of a higher grade