Short Story - The empty house

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Innledning:
"It’s Sunday morning and I keep looking at this old abandoned building, which happens to be our neighbor house.
I and my mother have just moved from London to Illinois, USA, which means that I have no friends and they speak really rubbish English in Illinois. My mother has been transferred to USA to take her boss’s work. He were the owner of the company ”Ford” one of the most selling cars in the world and also my mother’s husband."