Composition about Canada

Composition about Canada

Oppgaven inneholder litt om geografi og befolkning, histoie og språk, flagget og til slutt politisk styre.

Lærers kommentar:
1) Prepositon errors: "The area in 9 x106 sq. km "--> OF (not in).
2) You still have difficulty with It is/There are. --> It lives" --> THERE LIVE
3) roman catholic --> Roman Catholic
4) "The religion for the Canada people is mostly belong to the roamn catholic churc..." ?? Canadian people . Your sentence is confusing. Do you see that?
5) I found your paragraph about the Canadian flag confusing. Have a look at it again. Do you agree?

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